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Deep Fir

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Cerulean sky
Fir trees gracefully bow
the wind dances

Surrounded  by
shades of deep fir and grey
winter woodland

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  • The Fun House silver member
    January 28

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    A lovely set of haikus. It makes me wish to venture forth into this world and feel the brisk air and beauty. Great job


  • oceanbluize
    December 30, 2008

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    oh the word cerulean catches my attention first off, not many know, yet mention that beautiful blue...it just adds a little more. Setting a perfect tempo for imagery here...your fire has not diminished I will say...wonderful!
    Love Ocean.