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Gossip

 

Whispering words hidden by hands

      Pointing fingernails fresly polished

As I walk into the core centrum of

                                                   ..gossip

 

How can one resist the burning urge

              Of sharing todays jucie news

To all who willingly will listen to my

                                                  ...gossip

 

For did you hear about Jhons wife

            She is doing their gardener

I saw them through the window!

                                                   ..gossip

 

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Prompt: Shade of green (gossip)
Limit, 12 lines.

Wow, who would guess my faded green colour was named gosspi

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  • The Fun House silver member
    January 28

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    A cute piece and nice take on the prompt. You do have some typos, especially in the last stanza. "John" "their" "through" But overall, it's good and I enjoyed it


    • Meroza
      January 28
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      Thank you for pointing those out to me, and just a note Jhon is a Norwegian name and is spelled right