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Verse 1
The fires way to high
These words are way to loud
And the only thing that can be
Hear above this muffled sound

Is that look in your eyes
The one i should have never see
But here we are again tonight


Chorus
I'll sing you to sleep
We'll deal with this in the morning
But i'm not so sorry
But lying's to far beyond me


Verse 2
Don't be so scared
Don't be so nervous 
But its not that easy
I will make you earn this

Believe me i'm lying
Im really quite selfish
So stay with me again tonight


Chorus
I'll sing you to sleep
We'll deal with this in the morning
But i'm not so sorry
But lying's to far beyond me


Bridge
Well im just so scared
And im just so nervous
It can never be easy
I hope that i've earned this

Chorus
I'll sing you to sleep
We'll deal with this in the morning
But im not so sorry
But lying's so far beyond me

So i'll sing you to sleep
We'll deal with this in the morning
But im not so sorry
I just hate it when you lie to me

Author notes

I dont know what its about, i had the chorus and first verse for the longest time and finally sat myself down and finished it.

I also can't think up a name for it cuz im not the best with words, so if you have any ideas please let me know.

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  • humm..i never understand why you tell me i'm better at writing than you. this is very very very good.

    as for a title..."Believe me, I'm Lying" would work...but so would "Sing you to Sleep". although...the question marks are pretty cool too.
    :]

    • thanx, but believe me im lying is the title to a song by forever the sickest kids and i respect them to much to take it, and sing you to sleep kinda reminds me of a song by death cab for cutie, oh well. haha sorry. thanx tho!!

      • mmmmm..i see.
        well...like i said...just leaving it as question marks is pretty cool..although it would make it hard to talk about about...
        XD