I knew it wouldn't end how I wanted,
But I let my hopes get the best of me,
And now I'm feeling the sting,
Of words that shouldn't have meant anything
You could have told me before now,
So I would be farther down the path of recovery,
Your reluctance protracted the illusion,
How I wish you would have told me when it started
You said you'd tell me anything,
I now see the limitations of that statement,
I just hope you're happy
I love you,
I'll be here if you need me,
But please, next time,
Tell me when someone else is on your mind
Honest opinion please
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'You could have told me before now,
So I would be farther down the path of recovery,
Your reluctance protracted the illusion,
How I wish you would have told me when it started'
I love that verse. It's very good, about 1-3 rhymes per verse. Very good, just right amount..
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