Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

on the way.




bile seeps in through
the taste buds in my tongue

leaving bits of cold rusty iron
against my rattling soul

& yes, yes, yes.
i miss you. but you don’t know that.

colors slap me in this
breathless chase- i catch your laugh
and put it beside my blue skies.

i know i’ll find you somehow.



    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • divebar
    January 5, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    you had me from the onset. and the repetition actually worked really really really well. lol.