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lighthouses.


your face
swims before me, stark against
blurry darkness that lays

like an open stretched road.

sometimes
each fibre of your smile darts
and stays supended on my mind;

i can feel seconds
our eyes locked through shadows
and found flickering lighthouses

etched deep in our brittle souls.

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  • divebar
    January 5

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    i just realized how ridiculous and vague that was. lol. i meant i dont know about "and found flickering lighthouses." the alliteration is a little odd. but im weird.


  • divebar
    January 5
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    i dont know about the lighthouses. the rest is fantastic.

  • Agnes
    January 3

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    I've always loved lighthouses; it's actually what drew me in, and I'm glad. Your lighthouse metaphor is well done.