Through a reflection of a perfection
a image is seen long before creation
has, ever been deemed.
Mystical land of promises, dreams,
flowing in between the eras. Not only
today or tomorrow which I claim as
mine. But as a reminder of my life and
joys I find in this place I mold as new clay,
for new day
a perfect vision of my
mind...
A contest entry
- FANTASY PICTURE INSPIRED VI: 16 ENTRIES / 60 WORDS by ShelleyA.
1600 points, ended January 17, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very nice write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice word choice, alliteration and assonance. Word count in poem: 65. Thank you for your entry.
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An inspirational piece. Good luck in the contest.
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I loved the message that this piece brings to the reader. I checked out the picture and you did very well putting your words to the picture.
This really makes the reader think of their life and what changes can be made..
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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