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Stars in your Eyes

Word Bank # 10 by: kodi

hello
apple juice
love
orange
operation
party
fun
scary
horrible



Hello,  my little angel
Why do you look so sad today?
Don’t think yet of tomorrow
For tomorrow is another day.

Come, my darling angel
Let’s have some fun today
I’ll give you a party
Let’s celebrate the day.

Be jolly; let your spirit be free
Enjoy, while you’re still young
It is one tricky operation
To make ones life worthwhile

Let each moment bring you
Something to cheer about
We can play “hide and seek”
Till you grow tired and weak.

While you feel a need for rest
I’ll peel one orange fruit for you
Then drink the apple juice I made,
I'm sure,it will take away your thirst.

Now, my little adorable
Smile; life is not horrible
Maybe, a little scary
When you pout and look unhappy.

Tonight, before you go to bed
Say a little prayer of love
Be thankful for God’s gifts;
They're lovely stars in your eyes.




summer51








Author notes

Given Title: Letter “S” - Stars in your Eyes


Kids are wonderful angels.
They live for today.
No fears for tomorrow.
Life for them is about play, eat and sleep.
When they are happy, their eyes twinkle
Like the tiny stars in heaven.


-The Author-

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  • Topnotchsy
    May 5, 2009

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    This is a really lovely piece, and a great job with the word prompts. Surprised it only received honorable mention.


    • Summer52
      May 6, 2009

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      Hi Top

      Thanks... an HM for me is more than enough with my simple poetry talent.
      Am not so good in deep vocabulary words.


      summer51

      • Topnotchsy
        May 6, 2009
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        I disagree. Might take some time and practice, but I'm sure you can net some golds and silvers. And take it from me, there's no real need for fancy vocabulary.


        • Summer52
          May 7, 2009
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          I agree, Top

          Practice and practice until your hand hurts....

          Just teasing...Thank you for your nice comment ,,,I do appreciate kind feedback, though I like constructive one also. Makes me feel more normal




          summer51


  • Lee Tai Wah
    January 12, 2009
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    Hi summer

    Well done. Another trophy for you!

    • Summer52
      January 15, 2009
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      Hi, Lee

      Thank you for the comment and dropping by.

      summer51


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 5, 2009
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    summer, you turned the list
    into a sweet chat, full of warrnth
    and caring!

    Mumsy

    • Summer52
      January 5, 2009
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      Hello, Mumsy...

      My sincerest thanks, again po


      summer51

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