Hope

This tiny baby in the womb
The greatest hope of all mankind
Today her light can fill a room
When she reveals a sparkling mind

The greatest hope of all mankind
She'll grow to be a special friend
When she reveals a sparkling mind
We'll all be careful to attend

She'll grow to be a special friend
This baby will be one we know
We'll all be careful to attend
Amera is the child on show

This baby will be one we know
Today her light can fill a room
Amera is the child on show
This tiny baby in the womb

Author notes

A pantoum for Amera's second Anniversay on AP
Embryo in womb by Dan Lacy

It reads better in Elvish!

A contest entry

A toast to AP's Favorite ~ Amera ~ promt by Rebekah-Ann. 1500 points, ended December 31, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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Joseph Hollis
January 1

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I think everything reads better in Elvish.

Beautifully written and a heartfelt dedication. Thanks for sharing.
- laiqua aran
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Desire
December 31, 2008

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Oh My~
Aaaaaaaaaaw this is Precious and Love the message You have brought forth
Excellent also Gosh I can only imagine in Elvish

Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo

Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
Rebekah-Ann
December 31, 2008

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Perfectly penned. Oh judging this contest is hard. I really love this poem and is exactly what I am looking for. Thank you for entering this contest with your lovely creative writing!

Becks
Amera
December 30, 2008

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Wow! I’m speechless!
I am so honored; this poem is perfect in every way.
It goes directly into me treasure room.

Love,
Amera♥