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Don't forget

Elephant in womb by Dan Lacy

The time she takes is nothing to regret
Each moment of her life is worth a year
You know that happiness is always near
And even tiny babies don't forget
      She is your stake on nature's greatest bet
      Your life can never be the same again
      The effort though is always worth the strain
      And even tiny babies don't forget
The two of you may live a strange duet
I know the greatest feelings that I've had
Are when a child has whispered "thank-you" Dad
And even tiny babies don't forget
      The time she takes is nothing to regret
      And even tiny babies don't forget

Author notes

An echo for Amera's second AP Birthday, the Picture is "Elephant in Womb" by Dan Lacy

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  • Desire gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Oh My~

    This is a Beauty Jeff and Love the form also the message conveyed
    Excellent verse~ Powerful!!
    Woo Hoo~
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    The echo of this poem is perfect and you really used the prompt perfectly for the birthday celebration. Thank you so much for this lovely entry!

    Becks


  • Gwenevere
    December 30, 2008

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    A painful, yet wonderful experience for any mother whether human or animal.The tie that binds.an excellent write for the picture prompt, Ros


  • Amera gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    Any poem that honors babies warms my heart and this poem does just that. It flows like honey to both the lips and the mind.

    Love,
    Amera♥