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Earth's Harmony

 

Dance upon the earth,
while dreams sprout forth.
Children's laughter make
Angels hearts flutter.

In God's eyes
innocence breathes
in the ocean's deepest abyss.

Scents from earth
lift weary hearts
as tranquility encircles us

silence sweeps through
life like a summer breeze
joyous sounds can be heard

from miles around
trees & flowers
dance in meadows
in love’s perfect harmony.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Artwork by Julia Starr aka night-fate
Contest – 60 Word Picture Prompt 14

**60 words exactly. I will be counting to make sure.**

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 17

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    A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Nice use of simile. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good descriptives, word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Word count: 60 words. Thank you for your entry.

  • Thor-201
    January 3
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    Absolutely beautiful. Well penned. Best of luck in the contest


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 3

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!

    Oh my! I can feel her sitting there dreaming all of this as she gazes serenely into the pool of crystal clear water!'s

  • Lovely poem.

    What a beautiful piece, I love nature and beauty and this captured both. Thank you.

  • Ah..you are dancing yourself with the words..emotions..and with the sentiments as well..a great crafting bringing the truth of nature around..well said..


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    Wow, this is gorgeous! You both did a wonderful
    job bringing this picture to life with your words here. Such beauty and tranquility is felt when reading through this. The imagery is great too! Lovely work here and all the best to the both of you in this contest!




    Jeremy0826

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