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Heaven

Your intoxicating scent alerts my senses to the comfort of your easy presence.

Infinite beauty of heavens promise enhances the long awaited reunion, encouraging the moment we've so desperately longed for.

Pain fades into the distance with the approach of a known peace as two connect; illuminating the darkness of grief, returning love to life.

The vivid colors of love surround us; adding a blissful sensitivity to our awareness of one another as we merge.

Re~claiming what was stolen we euphoricaly consume each others essence becoming intoxicated in the unyielding abundance of forever.

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  • Thank you for your wonderfully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • Thank you for your beautifully expressed write, good luck in my contest and happy new year, Josie


  • poeticcaresses
    December 31, 2008

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    This is absolutely beautiful! Such imagery and passion. I also love that it can easily be interpreted different ways. You could be talking about a lover or (as the background suggests) a reunion with nature's beauty after a long cold winter. I'm sure others will or have read even more meanings into it. My favorite kind of poetry is that which can have different meanings for different readers. Again absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    wow

    so tenderly written, beautiful thoughts on love..excellent write my friend..good luck in the contest..