Colored chemistry
sprays
perfumed abstract dreams.
Complex emotions
compose splashes
of vivacity.
Multiple images
infuse in one.
-Creativity's varied perceptions-
Author notes
Prompt: I want to reach that condensation of sensations that constitutes a picture.
-Henri Matisse, Notes d'un peintre, 1908
20 Words
20 minutes
Picture Credit: http://th04.deviantart.com/fs22/300W/f/2007/363/e/d/edaa0c88fdee1464.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie for Sixpence #1 by Joseph Hollis.
700 points, ended December 30, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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Excellent
Such great descriptions. So very well done. Congratulations on the bronze. -
Congrats on the bronze. It fits the prompt perfectly.
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This is stunning...
It is simple yet so complex at the same time. It doesn't draw you in but it does explain what an artist is trying to do when he creates...like us! But with words. Wonderful!
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Good morning, Happy New Year, and congrats on this trophy winning poem!! I cannot wait to see what this new year holds for you and poetry. It should be mind-blowing!
Love, Lane
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This is briliant, and well worthy of a shiny.
I adore how you took this prompt and how you gave life to the image.
Congrats
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Bravo!!!
Great Work!! 
Congrats on the Bronze!!!
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Oh wow. I thought this was amazing, in such a short little bit of poetry it was fantastic... im in awe.
Amazing work here
Laura
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Wow! Nice read with lots of imagery and complex words. Congrates on the bronze, hon.
Much love
~Noor
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Excellent
You can always do so much with a few words. Congratulations on the bronze.
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wow, love it, the ending was superb, congrats on the bronze, and take care, love you sissy
Stephanie ♥
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i think if you get rid of the gerunds & make it present tense, it will read with a better flow.
like so;
[Colored chemistry
sprays
perfumed abstract dreams.
Complex emotions
compose splashes
of vivacity.
Multiple images
infuse in one.]
but, only a thought
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woohoo!! you did a wonderful job!! Congrats on the bronze!!! me thinks you should have gotten more!
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Nooo! I shouldn't have! I shouldn't have even been awarded bronze. Haha. It was a great shock!
Hehe but thank youu!
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Congrats on your trophy! Well deserved poet!
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blah well in my eyes I thinks you should have gotten better lol.
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yours is wonderful, par excellence
glad to read
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Stunning use of color and abstraction here. I enjoyed the subtle alliteration here. Presententation is also quite nice. Best of luck.
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yay! 
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