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Turbulence

I relish this burning sting on my cheek
I would I turn the other one
If salted words it'd stop from leak
Or settle to clear what watered blue in eyes
The shell lurid betrayal did bid to rise...


Author notes

Option one.

I haven't written in months so this is me getting started again. I used some of the words in the word banks as well.

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  • Abnormal
    December 30, 2008

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    Well done, I like this. The words are well-fitting, as well as helping to make the poem very unique. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!