a Japanese delight
especially at night
her pearl white skin
her desires within
what's her dark side?
dark secrets hide?
a Japanese tradition
their quiet mission
wishing to see through
her soul for a clue
what is her yokubou?
Author notes
deaf and silent
Prompt 3
Yokubou means desire in Japanese.
A contest entry
- Quickie.. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 30, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Honourable Mentions Only! by amaranthine lover.
775 points, ended January 22, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is very beautiful here
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Very good
I love poetry where I can learn something new most enjoyable read
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Wow, this was short but so beautiful! You truly have an amazing talent! Keep on doing such a great job!
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very nice. seductive sounding in an innocent way. ^^
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Learning and poetry all in one.
The rhyming style of this is wonderful. It helps with the flow here. The staggered presentation is also quite nice. Congratulations on your HM!
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I've never heard of that word before. I like learning new stuff. Loved the flow in this piece.
Best of luck
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arigato
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Great rhymes! And a very nice take on the picture. Good luck in the contest.
Much love
Ylova
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thanks!
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This was a really good poem! I loved it from beginning to end! there was such a deep story here in your words. Bravo! thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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thank you
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need few mins? thanks a bunch
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