sitting near my back door
questioning which course to favor
deep in the grooves of my mind
i am wandering an ocean
of barren teardrops
on a lifeboat sailing
for a place to call home
A contest entry
- Quickie by Merry Christmas.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful...
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a good poem
i like the imagery -
still a great poem. nice flow to it and i even imagined it! yay for you! =]
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This is quite an interesting take on the prompt, a very abstract way of looking at things. It creates some very good imagery.
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This was a wonderful take on the prompt... It had such a soft feel to it, but sad in many ways. a wonderful write. thanks much for sharing, best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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this sounds like a place I've been many times before. the images that you pain with your words is simply amazing.
I really like the last 4 lines the most.
good luck
MW
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very nice
paints lovely pictures
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