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The Promised Ocean

The third generation monarch butterfly
reaches South; the change we need
pollenizes.
A shoe northward bound
loses its way.

It is said there is an ocean
inside sea shells
(complete, with all its whales
and euphoric dolphins),

and the waves have broken free
from the weeds.

The president elect
will now be mister president
and our fingers crossed,
as we leave historic
voting thumb impressions on the beach,

cup the seashell
to our ears.

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  • aestival
    January 18

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    I really liked this! It's such... a different perspective, and it's a gorgeous image. The lines "and the waves have broken free / from the weeds" took my breath away.


  • ChelseySmile
    January 18

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    This is so unique and beautiful.
    So colourful. I love the imagery created here.
    Like Joseph said, Politics and nature in one.
    Masterpiece
    .
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 31, 2008

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    An interesting use of metaphor here. Politics and nature all in one fell swoop. This is quite nice. Well done.