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Edward or Jacob?

Two choices
Two fates
Two destinies
Two lives that could be lived
Both so different
Both so right
Oh won’t someone please shed some light
On me
So I can finally decide
So I can finally choose
Between my own personal Edward and Jacob
And it’s harder than I thought
And I’m not Bella
And there are no vampires
No werewolves
Just two boys
Both so perfect in their own way
Both so right
But there can only be one
Two choices
No more chances
One decision to be made
So how does this love story end?
With team Edward
Or Team Jacob?

Author notes

I got this idea because i'm reading Twilight again. I found that it actually fits very much with my life. I have my own personal edward and jacob.

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  • XXheartbroken3XX
    February 26
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    wow great write..... hmmmm when you wrote this, did you consider that Edward and Jacob are total opposites in some ways. Edward is more like beautiful, graceful snow. And Jacob is more like the exciting warm fire. so..... is that the same with your two guys???
    Cool write though.
    XoXo


    • blondevamp
      February 26
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      Thanks. Yeah it kind of is like that in really life. At the time my Edward was "the perfect guy" who might have even been too perfect and my Jacob was my best friend turned love intrest, who wasn't perfect at all, but he was real. I was really amazed how my boys fit the two characters so well.

      Thanks for the comment.


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    December 31, 2008
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    This was a fabulous poem, i liked it alot, thanks for entering it in my contest, good luck (:


  • Selene Greyback
    December 30, 2008
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    Same here, I'm here for ya in whatever you decide. The choice will come to you mom, don't worry


  • FinalDusk
    December 30, 2008
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    I forgot to mention this before, but I love the concept of using Twilight. Great author and series. I hope you can choose "Bella"


  • FinalDusk
    December 30, 2008

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    I can't make the decision for you but I will support you all the way. Besides, even though Jacob can be warm and caring, Edward just want the best for you. Well, so does Jacob no? In the end, they will accept your choice.


  • The Amazon Seer
    December 30, 2008
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    Who every you choose, I'm behind you.

    <3

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