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How to kill ignorance?

Setting with my anger,
as if it were beside me...
holding an intelligent conversation.
We are plotting on how to kill ignorance.
"Maybe you can strangle it" he said.
I dont know man...thats not personal enough.
I want to be able to look in Its eyes as its life perishes...
Feel the pulse slowly fade and cease to exist...
No weapons or anthing to help me,
just my bare hands as the cause.
Next he said, "Well maybe you can destroy what it loves."
Lightbulbs in my head start going off like strobes...
Take away all the things ignorance loves.
That makes perfect sense...
A beautiful idea it seems.
My anger is a very wonderful partner to think of such things.
After I take it all away...what then?

honest opinion please

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  • Addicus
    April 18

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    Wow!!! This is powerful my sexy friend.

    Ignorance is bliss some say; knowledge is power some say. Choosing to be ignorant is stupidity, and chosing to be powerful is ignorant. Everything is controdictory. The only way to distroy that paradox is to kill the source of ignorace...
    Ignorance is simply a human idea...
    So is humanity the source of ignorance?


  • wwfhrocks14
    February 22

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    in line three do you mean 'conversation'. cool poem. i liked it a lot... then again i am feeling angsty. haha. "My anger is a very wonderful partner to think of such things.
    After I take it all away...what then? <-- Terrific lines, ideas, thoughts! This speaks such truth. I love it. =) Check out my newest poem... i don't even remember it's title, oh "Rambling Thoughts." It reminds me of this a little =)


  • Sambooka
    February 2
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    WOW. Good Job!


  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    January 12
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    This is.....incredible.


  • bluestoneangel
    January 8
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    nice poem I enjoyed reading it

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