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Marianna

Star of the Sea,
What is it that troubles thee?

What makes you mad,
If not sad?
What makes you break a tear?
Such thing I fear!

Is there something I can do,
To keep you going through?

If there's something you would want to share,
Will you remember I will always care?

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"Star of the Sea" is the meaning of the name Marianna.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    February 2

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    Amazing write. this is a beautiful poem, and the emotions were so raw and passionate. the imagery was nice too, and the rhyming was clever. i like your use of words. great piece, keep penning


  • Xx-Yolanda-xX
    January 2

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    "If there's something you would want to share,
    Will you remember I will always care?"
    i like that part!
    oh, and like i said before...a really good poem!


  • Xx-Yolanda-xX
    December 31, 2008
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    GOOD!!:D

    yup!!you write good stories and for what i can see....
    good poems!!!...really good poems!!

  • XxTheLonelySpiritxX
    December 31, 2008
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    Wow, i liked it. it was very good. Write some more.

  • LiveLoveJabberwocky
    December 31, 2008

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    Hey, I thought you said you were a bad writer! LIAR! That was seriously awesome. You should really write more poetry, because that was amazing.

  • Kayl
    December 31, 2008
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    That was beautiful! I loved it!


  • Heroesrox
    December 30, 2008
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    Awesome job, SH. Good piece. Thanks so much for the share! Beautifully written!

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