Ode of my heart
(A timeless tragedy)
Kiss me…
Walk beside me in the rain.
Whisper to me your weakness,
As I show my strength.
Then we shall gain trust…
And, you my dear shall know
My love and respect for you
By no means will it disappear.
Even though the same might
Not be for you…
I ask for value.
Because I know, love isn’t
What you do…
Author notes
I don't know what I was really thinking. I know this didn't come out like I wanted it to.. but this is the best I have (so far). I'd apperciate it if you told me what I could do to make this a stronger and better piece.
I wrote this in pain.
Just think about that one person you have the most feelings for and them not having them for you. Think about all of thoose deep and passionate feelings you had and all the converstaions that took place.
Think about someone that 'loves' you ..but you know that its not 'love' at all. Because love is uncondtional!!
'I ask for value.
Because I know, love isn’t
What you do…'
tell me what you think.
Comments
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ish good
very tragic
good feel
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