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True Love

alone, confused and torn
twisted, tormented, and cursed 

 

inside wars rage on
needing to release anger
everyone goes against me
spitting on my face
making me small and weak

 

alone, confused and torn
twisted, tormented, and cursed

 

 

one day
I was defeated

giving up...

 

in the darkness
a bright light beamed

looking up and seeing you
in all of your beauty


knees go weak


having will power to go on

I fight and now feel alive
because of you

 

I will be

 

 

our

   story

   continues

 

Author notes

1st prompt pic http://stigmachina.deviantart.com/art/Seven-Lives-102464339

2nd - http://starlightblood.deviantart.com/art/Porcelain-98901653

3rd -
http://aphostol.deviantart.com/art/The-little-painter-of-dreams-101376812

 

 

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Comments

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  • AngelKat42
    January 3, 2009

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    you did an absolutely wonderful job with all of the prompts. excellent in fact. the imagery is outstanding.

    good luck
    kat


  • crimsondew
    December 30, 2008
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    OH! A lovely narration here dear, different and quite enjoyable!!!
    All the best!


  • Angelflower
    December 30, 2008
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    Oh this was really unique, I likes it very much


  • Jesann gold member
    December 30, 2008
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    Wow..a unique and interesting take.
    Very well done.

  • AngelKat42
    December 29, 2008
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