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winter sunset. . .
shadows deepen
in the lake
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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    "shadows deepen
    in the lake" ~ awesome imagery...I love this!


  • Stuart Higginson gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    Beautiful image, lucid and immediate, while being refreshingly distanced from typical nature images depicted in so many haiku.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 29, 2008

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    excellent~

    Excellent haiku sweetie
    You are the master of these....
    Loved it
    It should be in a contest..it would be a winner
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

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