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This is it

Pick up the phone
You know
Its me on the other end
Just talk a while
Let me ramble
My troubles away

I know you can't help
But just lend me a moment
To take hold
Of the feelings
That are taking control

I'm tossing and turing
And can't seem to fall asleep
Cause you're too complicated
For my dreams

And you know
I can't explain this
It's just crazy
You're just everything
So go crazy with me
It's not that bad
Of a place to be

Author notes

i dont know, listening to music and letting it write its self

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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    December 30, 2008

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    why are you so good at writing poetry!@#$%^* its no fair lolz.