She thinks she's fat,
with big hips and thighs
but cant you look properly
you'll see someone about to die.
But even in the mirror
she sees a fat girl
but others...they see
an ill child, leaving this world.
She doesnt care though,
she thinks she should be thin
for her to be happy
about herself from within.
She doesnt know what shes doing
shes slowly killing herself
she just doesnt know,
she'll be gone before everyone else.
Not only does she refuse to eat
she overdoses on pills
i try to tell her all the time
that....that stuff can kill.
And not only does she do that
she repeatedly cuts herself
so with them all combined
shes doing alot of damage to her health.
I always try to explain to her
that shes one special friend
to me and others around her
but...she still wants her life to end
So with each passing day
shes shrinking more and more
her healths getting worse
she could just drop to the floor.
She has no nutrients in her body
yet she has the pills and exercises
i'd be so upset if she died
i just want her to see how special she is.
She thinks shes better off dead
she really wants to leave this world
but she doesnt seem to realise
what kind of pain her death will cause.
Author notes
option seven: write something really dark and creepy!!!!
yea i do like gummy bears 
A contest entry
- Options!!!!! Hooorayyyz! :) by funshine-bear.
750 points, ended March 1, 2009, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is about one of my best friends...she cant see how nice she already is =[ she knows who she is. LUVE YOU HUNNY! xxxx
Comments
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oh my gosh this was so very sad!!!!
but it was amazingly written!
i loved your rhymes and the flow of the poem
extraordinary write! good luck with your contest
and i pray for you and your friend <3
huggggggglez!
-adria
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Wonderful Poem about one of yoru best friends, TY for the Comment about PONZI.
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:'( :'( :'( omg....i dont no what to say. Apart from i am soooooooooooo sorry. That is exactly how i feel about you too. And i aint about to die. I am fine. N even if i did die it is for the best. But babe, i wuve you so so so much and i am so sorry for causing you more pain. You are my best friend in the whole world and i am sorry. I wish i could believe what you tell me like i wish you could believe what i tell you :'( i miss you sweetie, where are you!! come back. can you message me your mob number too cos that prik that raped me broke my phone so i aint got it no more :'( i wuve you so much................. mwah xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Babe...this poem is so sad, but the saddest thing is....it is about you, you are that girl, i just wish you could see it :'( it breaks my heart you cant see how fantastic you are, and how thin you are. You will end up as this girl in the poem if you dont realise that you are not what you think. i wish you could seee it as you wish she could xxxxxxxxxxx
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