Pointed fingers
poking innocence,
unrelinquished heart
despair echoing footfall
damp bosom,
wades on
for plain terrains
life cloaks,
these rocky cliffs
will randevous with death
somewhere in calender.
Author notes
Prompt- on the rocks
In a list
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #46 by Aussie Gypsy.
600 points, ended January 10, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so wonderful, you capture so much to think on when the poem is over. Best to you in the contest
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Thank you
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Wonderful as always...you always leave me with much to ponder...lovely thoughts of truth and sadness...strong in brevity...excellent!
Best,
mystic
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Thank you so much for your kind words dear
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