With white winter
waking up the weather
I take comfort in the quilt
that covered me as a child
In silver starlight
subconscious thoughts
stir something
in my spirit
Perhaps it's the perfect time
to find peace in my pen again
in place of paperbacks
I'll plough though piles of paper
An inkwell for the
inspiration of imagery
from fluffy friends
to fuzzy fiends
With ink I will write you
rolling rivers to rock you to sleep
revel in the romantic
raindrops while they dance
Let the waves
of cerulean water
wash over you
while you dream
As I pen a novel
like nothing before
a never ending love note
for no one but you
Medicated with music
my muse flows to paper
making my words
move at great speeds
Being too picky for calligraphy
Curling letters and crippled words
I scrawl clumsily
my shredded thoughts coming together
With the black night lurking outside
I bind your book
and bring it downstairs
just as the doorbell rings
I'm aware that my new arrival
is the amazing you
but apathetically I leave
your book obviously out in the open
Greeted by a kiss
You kindly creep into my heart
and cling to my hands
clasping a ring onto my finger
Eyes open in awe
Expecting this I was not
But ironically enough
my intentions for writing
were to inspire your love
for a life with me
Author notes
OK well... never before have i gone this crazy... well I'm Nakatrea.. what do you expect
The words just started coming! and I couldn't stop it!
it all started with this
In silver starlight
subconscious thoughts
stir something
in my spirit
and the story sparked from there
I used every single freaking word in the word bank they may have been twisted to fit the context so forgive me
they appear in the following order:
White
Comfort
Quilt
Silver
Starlight
Subconscious
Thoughts
Spirit
Peace
paperback(s)
inkwell
imagery
fluffy'
fuzzy
dusk
dust(y)
coughing
cloud
create(d)
rolling
rock (ing)
romantic
cerulean
water
novel
note
medicated
music
calligraphy
scrawl(ing)
shredded
black
(door)bell
apathetically
ring
life
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As for the biggest contest ever thing... I know it doesn't fit your favourite types of poetry and I have no chance of winning but a comment would be nice 
A contest entry
- Random Options by Simply Simple.
1200 points, ended March 27, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bored Enter!!!!! Need to Read Something!!!!! by fairytalelovestory.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please judge as critically as you want
Comments
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You did an awesome job with the wordbank provide. Some amazing imagery, very beautiful:
Let the waves
of cerulean water
wash over you
while you dream
You are very talented!
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Why thank you! I have a gift for word banks
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Thoguht this was quite beautiful, particualrly that opening;
"With white winter
waking up the weather
I take comfort in the quilt
that covered me as a child"
Thanks for entering!
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And thanks for the comment
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Sorry for the late comment. Anyway, this is amazing. Your incorperation of the wordbank blew me away. Thanks for sharing!
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awsome!!!
Love the way you used all the bank. I did the same and it was hard for me. you did a graet job at it.
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Wow! You have really told a story with this one. I have seen alot of wordbank contests before but I don't think that I have ever seen one use all of the words from a large list. Thanks for sharing, best of luck in your contests.
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It appears you used all the words, nicely done., Inspiration does that.
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thanks
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Forgiveness is unnecessary. You have forged a masterpiece. ^_^
Your alliteration was awesome...masterful in some instances. And based on your author notes, this poem came to you as mine do...it starts with just one line or stanza, and your mind began to build the rest. ^.^ It is that very reason that I enjoy writing from word banks, myself.
Excellent work. It'll be hard to compete against this one.
--Flare
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Awwwww thanks! As soon as I woke up this morning I was like : COMPUTER! did he comment???? anyone??? no.. oh. damn.. but It was worth the wait! Thank you soooooo much. I enjoy your comments
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Well, you're quite welcome. I recieve some pretty cool comments from you, too, you know.
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