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Adentro de mi cabeza

Escrutiating lies roar like thunder through my head,
Horrificating thoughts; I fight,
But if I give up im only accepting and enjoying my sins,
Of evil fantasies trapped within,
Controling my lustful illusions,
But my grasp shall overpower,
These mindruling crusades of my desire,
I shall overcome my insanity of lies,
Stuck inside my mind; Brutally roaming around in spheress motion,
There piercing sounds of worries inside of my head,
I shall overcome whats inside of my mind.

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  • Unique Utopia
    December 30, 2008
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    wonderful

    whassup cuz, dis ur gurl Brandy, by the way...this was an exellent poem! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.