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On The Rocks

Missing image
 

Amongst the clank of crystal

and chatter of day's wrong

hanging eerily as clouded haze.

 

Overbearing boss of

impossible reasoning,

to loafer the water cooler.

Shiftless husband or nagging wife.

Courage afloat

in

Spirits on the Rocks

Author notes

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 10
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    I love where this went, it was outside the lines and I always love that. Best to you in the contest


    • Rclane gold member
      January 10
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      Thank you for the chance to muse and your time in reading and commenting.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 29, 2008
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    I like where you have taken the prompt for a change of an ocean storm.....Brilliant, clever write!

    • Rclane gold member
      January 10
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      Thank so much for your time in reading and commenting. Sorry to have be so long to reply. I work retail. Still pulling six day weeks.