i stare in amazement of the scene
trying to figure out what its to mean.
this is the best present received
as i give you a smile and a kiss to deceive.
i dont need your dear toys
i myself will give you your christmas joys.
as i take you to another bed
filled with roses stem, thorns, and head.
as i strip you down and tie you down
i smell your blood trickle, im your hound.
as i crawl to you getting cut to.
covered in our bed of blood and roses what to do?
i slide into your sweet open hole
as it throbs on me i fell anything but cold.
tattered and torn is our skin
exhaused we are deep within
covered in each others nectar
our bloods not even a factor
i untie you and lick you clean
your blood your juice everythign inbetween.
we shower off whats left of our rose bed
leaving behind the rough night weve had.
we moan, we cum, we bleed,
we live, we love, we leave.
Author notes
this is a reply to the scene she set up
I stand here behind this closed door
waiting on my you, my lover, my pet
wearing nothing but a black leather santa hat
a black leather and white fur top just covering
my nipples and a black leather thong.
My wrists bound with black leather straps
All the toys, whips, blindfolds and cuffs
are laid out on the table next to the bed
ready to be used.
As you walk through the bedroom door
and your eyes fall upon me
they light up like christmas trees.
Merry Christmas baby, I tell you
with a kiss on the lips...
I am your christmas present,
do with me as you wish.
Now it's your turn to have some fun
Tell me what you would do with me.
A contest entry
- Christmas Gift from Mistress by sensualbutterfly.
650 points, ended December 29, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love this. its dirty and erotic. very good write!
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moonlight vampire
wow this poem is very exotic and dirty lol um good write
sincerly,
angel -
wow awesome
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Ah the young ones are here to take the batton and carry on with the lusty writes and turn all of us on and on and on. Nice write. Thank you for reading some of mine.
Cheryl
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Wow! Great write! I love the different take on the contest. Thanks for the entry
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