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Harlequin

Harlequin screams at me,
through the flash of bright eyes.
I feel abandoned;
hated
by the impossible tint
of.......

A contest entry

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  • The Fun House silver member
    January 28

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    ROLFMAO, Ok, I will have to agree, expecially if this is the color. How else could one be inspired by it Creative and I like it

  • Labefaction
    January 6

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    Good, especially for a short poem. The background with the blue text is a little hard on the eyes though...