Her reality;
hands that showed
no mercy for a little girls
bare desperation.
His cruelty;
fell from a bottle
slowly flowing in harshness,
poured bitterly over icy emotions
~where her tears now burn in anger.
Author notes
on the rocks
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #46 by Aussie Gypsy.
600 points, ended January 10, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the silver!
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Ouch, I think I know this poem in the very depth of my heart, brilliantly done. Best to you in the contest
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aw sis this so deep and powerful I can relate to this your imagery and emotion are brilliant good luck in the contest
sis
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Hard words here..sad, but excellent imagery in the poem ...
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let me know when its done sis
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