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Despairation

Massive gambits rain down
as waterfalls,
tormenting my soul in the sand.
Black depression ensnares
my heart and money;
the pebbles draw blood.

Please, I beg you,
just give it to me on the rocks.

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Prompt: On The Rocks
35 words

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 10
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    This is so sad you captured your emotions so well here. Great job. Best to you in the contest