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Midnight Malady

In times like these
I feel so lonely
There is no ease
All I have, perceived as phony

When will the darkness ever bright?
When will I sleep with ease at night?
When will my burdens be ever so light?

Dusk will come,
Bring heartache and fear
All be undone
No-one around, to ever draw near

When will the pain ever be still?
When will I ever reach my fill?
When will I cease to swallow that pill?

Storm-clouds and thunder
Rain starts to pour down
All emotions asunder
No creation to iron the frown

When will the broken heart ever mend?
When will this torture come to an end?
When will I see a gift heaven-sent?

Blackness envelopes my head
Dead of night, Deadly foe
At the edge of my bed
Abandoning rest, considering woe

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  • Edited
    February 17

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    as aboomer already said many o many have been here.
    they say time heals all, bugger
    i say the first step to make it happen will heal much.
    well done.


  • aboomer silver member
    January 23

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    I really like the depth and emotion in this....the pain of lonliness and hurt is one I think most can relate to.
    (line 20, I think there is a typo.....should it be:
    'when will this torture come to AN end?'....}
    Nicely done!
    best wishes


    • Tristan Storm
      February 17
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      Thanks for your comment and the spotting of my mistake. I'll fix it quick.

      Thanks for reading.

      Hugz
      Tristan


  • Missy Lissy
    December 29, 2008

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    Im very glad to see you wrighting again. Its been too long. This is a great way to let it out... See you soon my friend. Great Write

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