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gust

leaning into winds
that push
keeping me at bay
conjuring memories
engraved on my heart
of the icy reality
that tore
through my fiery emotion
and melted away the blaze

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 10
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    This is gorgoues, it flows so beautifully here, you captured me. Best to you in the contest


  • Nangaleema
    December 29, 2008
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    very emotive write. i enjoyed. - NANGALEEMA


  • MichaelBe
    December 29, 2008

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    very nice
    one flowing verse of fantastic imagery and powerful work with a really strong semantical field around the elements


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    December 29, 2008
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    fantastic word usage
    it brought about wonderful imagery and emotion