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A Walk In The Forest

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One day I finally knew

What I had to do, and set out

Through the vast forest,

Searching for my soul.



I hadn’t the foggiest idea

What it looked like,

What size or color it was,

Or where I might find it.



But I knew it had to be hidden

Out there - somewhere.

The pleasant singing of the birds,

The softly scented mossy earth,



The blue sky above the pines,

The streaming crystalline waterfall,

The chirping of the insects

Surrounding my lingering feet,



All foretold I would find

It within. In God’s pristine

Wilderness, I found my soul

Was within me, all along.




Author notes

Image: Joyce Kilmer Memorial Forest (best-known for his poem, Trees): http://www.main.nc.us/graham/hiking/joycekil.html


I was inspired to write this, after receiving the following poem written for me, by Soulwhispher, below. Thank you, John.

She who walks her own lost road
With words she weaves a tale

Like a once lost magic ship
In her life she tried to sail

Dreams walk within her words
That cast a loving spell

Where she will lead is not known
For only time will tell

~SoulWhispher

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  • A beautiful composition written with an abundance of imagery--Very soothing and tranquil!
    An excellent composition to be proud of!


  • DolceVito gold member
    December 30, 2008
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    How lovely

    Extraordinary poems, vivid imageries.


  • Jesann gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    Oh both poems are so beautiful.
    Though I had no doubt, you know where your soul lies.
    Very well done.


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 29, 2008

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    Beautiful poems, they both are wonderful.



  • GotLilt
    December 29, 2008
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    So true


  • arafura gold member
    December 29, 2008
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    Beautifully penned!


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 29, 2008

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    Quite captivating. Nature's grandeur is certainly present within these words. This is peaceful read that's good for the soul. Well done.

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