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Treasure

The woods, silent beside me
Watch me walk alone
Catching my words as they fall

The well worn path
Covered with winters furry
I tread lightly

 

Broken branches capture how I feel

Darkness accompanies me

To the river around the bend

 

Forgive me forest

For I defile you

My most sacred treasure

Yours

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