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Tsunami

Tidal-washed in cold mountains,
Sun tanned; always glistening.
Unbreakable Tsunami.
Never trembling in fear,
Always rolling forward.
Moving the world with it's silent dance;
It brushes it all away.

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  • L3vity
    January 4

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    The first lines here aren't spectacular. Also, I don't agree with your choice to put the title/acrostic word in your poem. However, this is yet another example of a poem with a beautiful, incredible conclusion. Well done!


  • PureAmethyst
    December 29, 2008
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    lovely imagery in the last three lines babe.