Every regal leaf clinging still to winter’s bitter branch
inverted swiftly, revealing humbler color
the day your star descended clouded stair-steps
to bury its grace among us.
And in that hour I uncovered your astral spark
in versed and voiced expression,
no season’s ground could then withhold
my joy of treasured friendship.
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Aw...this is sweet.
A wonderful tribute.
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Awww how sweet. I am sure she enjoyed this. I love reading dedicatons. I really liked "And in that hour I uncovered your astral spark
in versed and voiced expression,
no season’s ground could then withhold
my joy of treasured friendship."
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Ten THousand...this is brilliant and a wonderful homage to a friend!
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Great imagery. Excellent "winter's bitter branch." Lovely progression from "bury it's grace" to "no season's ground could then withold" "your astral spark." Gentle majesty in "your star descended." Beautiful tribute to a "joy of treasured friendship."
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Oh my what beautiful thoughts and emotions you have penned in this. Anyone would be proud to have such written for them.
Best wishes
Gaylene
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Thank you so much for this wonderful poem. You made me tear up a little. Your friendship means a great deal to me and I always love to read your poetry. I hope you and your family had a wonderful Christmas. Peace and hugs, Liz
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You're welcome, doll. It was a real pleasure to write a little something in your honor.
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Precious...
Love the imagery as always you so perfectly use so well, and the words sincere that flow from your tender, sweet soul!
May this soul be blessed by your own.
Much love my friend, Timothy
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