Grab my soul
You stole my heart away
remember!!
I turned pale
draining my colour
remember??
I sit in blackness
cold nights
dull days
remember?
You were ice
frozen
remember? ????
Author notes
5-credit:by amptone is me choice
oh and Happy Birthday babes
A contest entry
- Pif by luna-midnight.
800 points, ended January 18, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely composed
I loved the sadness this poem portrays
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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like the repition works very well, and it flows great, has a longing trudge as well
thanks for entering and good luck, and thanks
Stephanie ♥
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