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then leave me, I love crimson

crimson crimson crimson
streaming down my arms
you always thought you loved me
but now I'm proving you it's wrong

''if you cut one more time'',
you screamed,
''I'll leave you
in your own agony''

well here you have me
you still ain't helping
and while you're packing
I know I'll die today

should my scarf be enough
to hang myself
are the trains still driving
so I can throw myself to them?

can I choke in my own puke
can I drown in my own blood
as the crimson flows
and my thoughts consider suicide notes

yet I survived today
and you left
like everyone else
yet I'm still here

cause the blade's there for me
to carry the agony
to help me through life
to kiss me goodnight

... need I say more?

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  • broken-angel
    January 2

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    cause the blade's there for me
    to carry the agony
    to help me through life
    to kiss me goodnight
    (love this part)

    amazing write hun, i loved it xx


  • lil00miss00me
    January 1
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    this is realy gd i love it

  • XmmusicXloverrX
    December 29, 2008
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    This is amazing. Good worl, its so sad!