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Soulsister

I stretch out
Her hand absent-mindedly
traces patterns
on my ankle

We sit
in companionable silence
letting the film
                  in front of us
                            go through its motions

I smile
Happy once again.

Walking
through the darkness
I squeal, taken by surprise
                                    at her attempt to
                                                      frighten me

And we laugh.

Her fingers
              link      with      mine

And hand in hand

We continue.

Later
we amuse ourselves
teasing the others...

And as we wait for them to return
I reach out
and wrap my arms around her

She returns the gesture.

And I smile

Happy
Once
Again


Author notes

I love you. You really are exactly like a sister...I could not live without you.

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  • Afxb
    December 30, 2008

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    This so sweet and so beautifully written.
    ...and so much a "girl thing"...it is so wonderful to be in places and with people where you know you just belong. Such fun too.
    You caught this really well with just a nice amount of detail.

    ( I love the way the words are arranged ... but I did wonder about each line being in capitals)