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My Heart Belongs to You

Through the hard times,
You were there.
Committed no crimes,
I knew you care.
My glass appears brand new.
No scratches not even a few.
This glass belongs to you

Your say is my praise.
When I was in a daze,
I managed to escape your maze.
It is definitely true.
I do love you
Thus, my heart belongs to you

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  • SugarInducedSeizure
    December 29, 2008
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    I like it. the rhyming seems a tad forced. i'm really no good at critiquing haha.