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Dedication to John Harvard

Extremely inspired, obviously a fan. 
Reaching your level is my desired plan.
We all know that you worked as hard as you can
All for to become this miraculous man.

In order to approach to my ambition,
I'm going to have to follow your mission.
The moment I reach to your position,
I'll know you’re the reason for this condition.
 
As generous as no one can be
Hopefully the one will be me
As intelligent as everyone should be
An idol is what everyone can see

All I am going through,
Is all because of you.
Now all I have to do,
Is become a clone of you

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  • SugarInducedSeizure
    December 29, 2008
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    same thing with the last one. maybe try some freestyle without rhyming just to practice.