free falling;
colliding and reforming.
iced over scars
from melting
in the light of day.
atmospheric pressure is too much
and she burns up
never reaching her target
-earth.
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Beautiful imagery. Love the way you took something cliche and turned it slightly different.
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I adore the metaphoric quality of this piece and can see so much of life/huniaty within it. I see well beyong the meteor. Most excellent.
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Meteors are interesting. There is so much about space we don't know or understand. So much we need to research still. Thank you for sharing your poetry with me.
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"iced over scars
from melting
in the light of day."
Lovely.
How did I miss this poem?!?!?
Shameful
Shelly
xxx
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never reaching her target;
-earth.
lovelove
but how can you have a semicolon and a dash in the same place :|
if there was no line break it would read
never reaching her target; - earth.
haha u need to choose one or the other.
i love the first two lines too
iced over should have a dash in between no? -
ohh i like very much honey
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