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A Mistake Trying To Be Made Right

Wanted for love
not to rebel
is my ideal love

but regretfully
it is mostly to rebel
almost never for love

so when you are involved
with someone
your equal

make sure its love
for love
not just to piss someone off

learn from my mistake....

Author notes

idk...another thought from that person that lives upstairs in that cranium of mine ^_^
12/29/2008

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • hypnorocker
    January 5

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    It is difficult when the feelings really only seem to exist just as a means to a more painful end for other who have harmed you... Great message and good poem...
    Thanks for sharing!
    peace,
    matt


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 29, 2008

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    So true! It's a terrible feeling when you fall in love
    with someone and their emotions aren't genuine and sincere. Lovely thought that you've penned here dear! I hope that you are well and take care!




    Jeremy0826