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I Think I Might Be A Little Jealous

She's my friend and I shouldn't hate her.

But when  I see her deep down inside of me wants to rip out her throat and hand It to her on a silver plate.

I see her and smile, force a hug, and pretend to love her little act.

But really I see right through it, so I calmly but carefully form a plan to remove her from the face of this earth.

I love her so, she's the closest of my friends.

But you know what they say, keep you friends close but your enemies closer.

I don't know what it is about this girl but she's different.
I wouldn't even care if another girl hit on him, but not her.
The way she says his name disgust me.
The words cut me like a knife and have me waiting for her breathing to stop.

Me and her talk, talk about all kinds of things.
Like good friends do.

No one notices but me.

I swear I can feel her eyes watching his every move but if only she knew that I could cut her eyes out with one strike. Never again could she look at him.

Her and him are friends and I understand.

But every-time he's with his friends she's always there.
Not me, her.

I am always busy so my time with him is short.
But don't worry her time is short lived.

I don't want to lose our so-called friendship over this but I sure as hell don't want to lose him.

You might think I'm crazy but I think that's a strong word to use.

I think maybe, possibly that I might be a little jealous.
What do you think I am?

Author notes

I know it probably sounds stupid but I just felt like writing it. Im not really jealous, at least I don't think I am. Just free feel writing.

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  • nature
    August 21

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    Crazy but enjoyable...

    .."..and hand It to her on a silver plate."

    Lol
    I would have encouraged her to take a loan; without my guaranties and enjoy the fun.

    Try to walk away with my friend: she never would dare.


  • cazzy71
    August 3
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    I like this

    This is the second time you have entered this,you placed it in one of my earlier contest.I still find it vile ridden,angst ridden,pain ridden.The poem is full of hatred,full of venom,and is so well written.Thank you.


  • cazzy71
    June 8

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    thankyou for your entry

    Venomous,nasty,spiteful! clearlywritten from the heart,truthful,painful,so real. Thanks for your contribution.


  • lindaburns gold member
    January 3

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    As long as jealousy is balanced with trust, a little of it won’t hurt. It’s when murder begins to be planned that you might want to step back a little. It’s the old “let it go and if it is supposed to be yours it will stay without being chained to a stake”. I’m not sure about your “me and her” and “her and him”. I just turned 62 and my grammar skills are not what they once were. Good emotional write. I like the way you don’t hold anything back.


    • Beautiful Liar
      January 3
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      Thanks for the comment but I wouldn't really do those things to a girl if I were jealous. Just writing about it makes me feel better. Happy Late Birthday!!!

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