Decisions decisions
made with mystic visions
a tisket a tasket
an overflowing basket
filled with walking shoes
empty of taboos
a digital camera
a single samara
flying on a breeze
to cure my dis-ease
as I wander the plateau
in suns setting glow
dissipating fear
embracing this new year.
A contest entry
- The Secret of the Lead Castings by ea.
700 points, ended January 1, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really liked this poem. cute rhymes
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well done
ea.'s lead castings what a great take on the prompt
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A Camera and extra pairs of Walking Shoes are all we really need as we wander year to year across our lives plateau. That's travelling light.
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This is a jaunty rhyme that rings with the wanderer's mysticism and packbasket on their back, traveling light with a lively step and a whistle on the nightwinds. I can feel a great degree of optimism in this poem.
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How are those mushrooms that you are consuming? lol. this one is a treat. what plateau is that you are wandering? Have you fallen off the edge yet? wth is a samara? this must be some new years stuff you're into deary. fun.
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Hi and welcome to the party!
Your lead mushroom has been recast as a:
BASKET, meaning = Consider well what you want to put of value into this basket. What it contains determines what is important and valued by you, to be carried into the next year...
Hope you enjoyed this secret of your lead casting and that it inspires you as it has celebrants since ancient Roman times.
All the best for 2009!
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