Hey little man its your daddy talking,Can't wait to see your first steps of walking,I can't beleive that i'm goina have a kid,I can't wait to see you i already have your crib,Nice suits ,shoes & boots i even got your bib,Incase your as messy as your father is.I know your going to be huge, Mommy's belly's getting bigI never had a dad so i hope i raise you right.i'll teach you how play sports and even hold a mic.When you need to i'ma teach you how to fight.Even tho i hope that you never have to strike.I know that your going to shine bright.So i hope you use your brain.I would give my life to keep you from feeling pain.I hope i never make you feel ashamed,Cause we got the same blood running through our vains.Heart breaks ive had my share of some.I wish i could say that you'll never have one.When you do i hope to me is where you come.To talk you through it me and you my only son.
Love Dad
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This is such a good poem. IT good even make a good rap song or something. I enjoyed reading it. It had great rhyme and rhytm. Congradulations on being a father!
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Nicely done
Nice rhyme and rhythm, such a sweet and hopeful piece, you can tell a lot of feeling went into this. This actually reads, to me, like one of those poems that just kind of lead you to the finish. You know, the ones you don't have to think about writing but it still comes out terrifically? It's beautiful.
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aww congratz im sure u will be a great father
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