Afraid
Rejected and worthless,
caught in a never-ending cycle.
Exasperated from the turmoil,
experienced day in and day out.
Lonely and longing
for contentment.
Counting hours,
minutes,
seconds,
until the fury ends.
They dont know this agony
inside me.
The rage and defeat,
sadness and betrayal,
and so it goes
on and on.
Author notes
This is more of stream of thoughts than something structured.
A contest entry
- misery loves company... by nobodys-girl.
700 points, ended January 18, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this, it's pure emotion in words a nice read
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Well, you nailed the prompt with this one. There's so much sadness and self-loathing in these words. I enjoyed your stream of thoughts. Best of luck to you.
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thanks my friend
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i love this! i love that theres no story to it, its all emotion and hurt. its amazing. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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thank you and I hope you feel better soon
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